so I made a videos for my gf already (it contains our pictures, videos, our fav music) but I wanted to do something more for her. I was planning to write a song but I am not sure how good it will turn out. I wrote her a very good poem before, when we first started and wonder if the song would be good. Any other suggestions? Ideas?
I want to share my poem with you guys, give me some comment, I may revise this into a song or make a new songs. This poem is sort of sad...
I love you so much that it hurt
By: Bao Chau
11/19/09
I met you on a hot summer day
The first time that I saw you
I realize that you are special to me
We started off as friend
Through all the playfulness
Through all our laughter
Something special has sparked
Is it love?
I knew that I can’t ever forget you
Our sweet kiss one summer night
It is sweet like honey
One look at your eyes and I feel mesmerize
Your lips taste like honey
The sweetest honey of them all
I realize that then
Not only that I care about you
But I love you!
Oh honey! Oh honey!
Why must this be so?
Why must distance separate our love?
I know this is true love
I have never felt this way about anyone
Thousand of miles separate us apart
Distance is not only our problem
Our love is impossible
Is it wrong to love you?
Our last day together
I will remember and cherish always
For the rest of my life
Bittersweet goodbye
I left my broken heart in Vung Tau
I came back to America with a heavy heart
I left a piece of my heart with you
We call each other everyday
Through texting and webcam chatting
Our love grew even greater than so
Even though we are closer than way
I wish I can hold you in my arm
I wish I could kiss your lips
I wish to hold you in my arm
I wish to be by your side forever
To take care of you
And to give you unlimited love
Unconditional love
For you …
I would do anything to be by your side
Would you wait for me?
Or would time fade our love?
I am so afraid of losing you
I miss you so much that it hurts
I love you so much that it hurts
I want to share my poem with you guys, give me some comment, I may revise this into a song or make a new songs. This poem is sort of sad...
I love you so much that it hurt
By: Bao Chau
11/19/09
I met you on a hot summer day
The first time that I saw you
I realize that you are special to me
We started off as friend
Through all the playfulness
Through all our laughter
Something special has sparked
Is it love?
I knew that I can’t ever forget you
Our sweet kiss one summer night
It is sweet like honey
One look at your eyes and I feel mesmerize
Your lips taste like honey
The sweetest honey of them all
I realize that then
Not only that I care about you
But I love you!
Oh honey! Oh honey!
Why must this be so?
Why must distance separate our love?
I know this is true love
I have never felt this way about anyone
Thousand of miles separate us apart
Distance is not only our problem
Our love is impossible
Is it wrong to love you?
Our last day together
I will remember and cherish always
For the rest of my life
Bittersweet goodbye
I left my broken heart in Vung Tau
I came back to America with a heavy heart
I left a piece of my heart with you
We call each other everyday
Through texting and webcam chatting
Our love grew even greater than so
Even though we are closer than way
I wish I can hold you in my arm
I wish I could kiss your lips
I wish to hold you in my arm
I wish to be by your side forever
To take care of you
And to give you unlimited love
Unconditional love
For you …
I would do anything to be by your side
Would you wait for me?
Or would time fade our love?
I am so afraid of losing you
I miss you so much that it hurts
I love you so much that it hurts
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