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    So, I wrote a poem about long distance relationships...

    I wasn't sure if this would fit here or go to Ramble On, so I just put it here. I wrote this for my boyfriend for no particular reason. But it really suits LDRs so I hope everyone likes it!

    Over the shimmering heart
    With all of my light
    We shan't fall apart
    As we will win the fight

    With all of my light
    Follow my call
    As we will win the fight
    Giving our all

    Follow my call
    It's never over
    Giving our all
    We are forever

    It's never over
    Cherish the love
    We are forever
    Peaceful like a dove

    Cherish the love
    It will always be our own
    Peaceful like a dove
    See how our love has grown

    It will always be our own
    We shan't fall apart
    See how our love has grown
    Over the shimmering heart

    Some lines do repeat because its a special type of poem (forgot what they were called) that use that writing technique.

    #2
    Very lovely

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