30+ little ashamed need help love letter

[dragonlady]

i'm a little ashamed but can any body help me with my love letter? not helping write one but read it before i send it?

it's the first time i am really in love and also my first love letter so i want it to be good, and because my english isn't perfect and i am from holland it would be nice if somebody check's it so that there are no unment insult's or something...
thanks!

[snow_girl]

You can pm me with it if you'd like.

[dragonlady]

thank you!