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    Poem for her...

    One day of January, I met that girl,
    We had a quick chat, but no more.
    Some weeks after, I got to know you a little more...

    One day of April, I saw that girl,
    ...I had a quick look, but enough to turn my heart crazy.
    Some days after, I was thinking about her daily.

    One day of May, I date that girl,
    We had a quick kiss, but no more.
    Some months after, I'm sure I have found mi amor.

    Yesterday, I said bye to that girl,
    Bye... no, but see you !
    Some months after, I'm sure we'll be together,
    Cause if there's something I'm sure about,
    Is that everyday our love is getting stronger...

    Te amo, forever <3

    I feel it good, but it's kind of my 1st try, so maybe I miss some "things"
    ?

    #2
    It sounds good to me! That's the great thing about poetry, it's great as long as it comes from the soul. I'm sure she'll love it!

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      #3
      Cute

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        #4
        Very sweet
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