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    #16
    Oh, I love writing poems (and all sorts of writing too). I was ill and hospitalized, even though that, we had contact as much I could(the hospitals' wify was bad but worked). And he was so desperate and torn, he couldn't do anything over there and I saw that in his writings. I wrote this then and sent it to him. [Note: One verse is not displayed here because it could be innapropiate.]

    "I know you cannot do anything
    Watching, worrying, feeling helpless
    But you always, to me, do something
    Even if it is speechless

    If this is not the time to wonder, and the train wont stop at your station
    I do not know what it is
    But without any hesitation
    I know it is you that I miss

    Maybe it is hard to know which words to choose
    But I know some words that are true
    It is few but I know what I want to use
    It is "thank you"

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      #17
      Originally posted by Malaga View Post
      He used to write poetry before and some of it was for me, and it was so lovely. Unfortunately he doesn't write anymore these days which is a shame, it wasn't half bad

      I never wrote poetry myself, I'm not the type, but I wrote a funny story once where he was this James Bond character and I cast his friends in various roles from allies to villains. I used all of their peculiarities to build a story. It was one of my best works ever and it entertained him so much.
      That sounds so cool! I always wanted to do something like that and involve all the people around him, but I could never come up with a good story.. maybe I'll try again!

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      Second Visit: 06/06/2013 - 08/21/2013 ~ Proposal: 07/06/2013 ♥
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        #18
        Bridgette and I met on a poetry forum so a lot of the poems we wrote were about each other. The first time we really spoke properly to each other away from the main threads of the site was when we randomly challenged each other to a poem write. We gave each other a picture to write about and we enjoyed it so much we talked more and I think we both felt something for each other and without saying so, most of the poems we posted were written about each other. Since being together we have written numerous poems for each other or about how we feel, distance, anxiety etc. she is far superior a writer than I but its still a great feeling to put feelings down on paper to a poetic scheme for her to read.

        Some great ones posted in here

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          #19
          haha, it seems like every poem i write these days is to/for him. its kind of cheesy

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            #20
            I wrote this to my man nearly one week ago.

            "Our love is like a mountain side,
            Full of highs & lows.
            Our love is like a garden bed,
            Ever changing as it grows.
            Our love is like the ocean,
            Deep & full of wonder.
            Our love is powerful like a storm,
            With its lightening & it's thunder.

            Our love is pure & true,
            It spans air, sea, land & time.
            Our love is so unique & strong,
            So steadfast & sublime.
            My love for you grows everyday
            & everyday I miss you more.
            I long to be back in your arms
            When together we will soar...."

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              #21
              I haven't done it with my SO, nor has he done it to me because he's not the type. My excuse is writer's block lol.

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                #22
                I write my SO songs, which are basically just poems but any excuse to sing to her and i'm on it haha
                my girls <3

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                Met in person ~ 30th August 2017 ~
                Became official ~ 15th September 2017 ~
                Closed the distance and moved in together! ~ 18th June 2018 ~

                Ash
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                  #23
                  I've tried a couple of times, but I don't think mine are any good (not that I remember them).

                  I mainly stick to plain old letter writing just to express how I feel for her.
                  Last edited by WarwickGuy; November 17, 2015, 08:24 AM. Reason: Grammar

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