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    #16
    Originally posted by Zephii View Post
    I love poetry. Obi isn't big on it though, and doesn't write for me any more. I'm not great at love poems though, I try not to be sappy. With that said, here's one of mine about LDRs....

    Real life is a role-play.

    Maybe it’s true what Shakespeare says,
    we are merely players,
    and the world is just a stage.

    Well, I’m acting out life in two different places
    So why does it feel like both are in stasis?
    I’m waiting and watching the clock turning, no news
    Half of the life I’m living’s a ruse.

    Here I’m tending the baby, and holding your hand.
    I’m scrubbing the dishes while kissing my man.
    We’re watching a movie yet I’m vacuuming too
    Then the lines become blurred – tell me which part was true?

    Did my study while we were sleeping
    I made you dinner, but I had to eat it
    I caught the train but you heard the cliché
    “Darling, you’re so close, but so far away”

    Maybe there’s truth in Shakespeare’s word,
    we are merely actors, upon the stage of the world
    And my real life is just a role-play.

    Copyright (C) Miri, Don't post in other places without permission blah blah
    I saw this poem just now, Zephii. Love it! It sounds like (with the rhythms and everything) it could be a spoken word piece.
    My heart belongs to a pilot!
    ~*~
    ~*~
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      #17
      Originally posted by Trethsparr View Post
      I saw this poem just now, Zephii. Love it! It sounds like (with the rhythms and everything) it could be a spoken word piece.
      Thanks This made my day brighter!
      Happily married to the little Canadian boy I never thought I'd meet in person

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        #18
        wow these are all beautiful!

        I wish I knew how to write a poem..any one know where I could take a crash course?

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          #19
          he just wrote me this one last nite made me cry....i love him so much!



          You & I
          To many people you are just another
          Another lady in the world
          To me you are special
          You are one of a kind

          You are gentle
          You are sweet
          You don't even know
          What you are to me

          Your my comfort when I'm in pain
          Your my shelter under the rain
          You wipe my tears away
          With a smile you make them fade

          You are my #1 fan
          And I'm am yours
          Were each others trophy
          At the end of the road

          We have goals
          We have ambitions
          We want them together
          No matter collisions

          No matter the obstacles
          Through thick and thin
          We hold on
          Like a safety pin

          You always light me up
          You make me want to discover
          Myself and learn everyday
          Even when in need to recover

          Recover my strength when I am weak
          With you by my side I'm not in need
          You are more than a lady
          Just to me
          Mike

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            #20
            Aww These are all beautiful! Great job everyone

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              #21
              Originally posted by agentholli View Post

              I wish I knew how to write a poem..any one know where I could take a crash course?
              Haha I was thinking the same thing!

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                #22
                It’s that time again.

                It’s that time again, my lover, my friend.
                Our time went so fast, now it’s all in the past.
                Run my hand down your face, then a silent embrace.
                And just like before, tears fall to the floor.

                We’ve laughed and we’ve cried;
                We’ve loved and we’ve smiled.
                Though as hard as we try,
                We can’t slow down time.

                Don’t want it to end. I love my best friend.
                We try to be strong but we’ve known all along,
                The longer we take, the more our hearts break,
                As we say our goodbye.

                The cab has arrived, and is waiting outside.
                The time has now come, to kiss, then I’m gone.
                Please hold me and lie,
                Tell me time will fly by,
                Til we are together again.

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                  #23
                  I'm not at all a poet, but I love reading poetry. These are wonderful!
                  LFAD Book Challenge: 4/25 Complete
                  Currently Reading: Les Miserables, by Victor Hugo (219/1463 pages read)
                  Total Pages Read This Year: 3283

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                    #24
                    Another day closer to you

                    Today, as I wake,
                    You’re so far away,
                    Feels like an age,
                    since I’ve looked at your face.

                    Spring has arrived,
                    With its colour outside,
                    and once more I rise;
                    to get on with my life.

                    My heart was so jaded
                    My spirit had faded,
                    Loneliness it seemed
                    made a home in my soul.

                    Then another day’s gone,
                    And before long,
                    I rest and I wonder,
                    Pause and I ponder

                    It’s another day
                    closer to you.

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                      #25
                      I write poetry all the time! I would post, but I don't want my work to get jacked x[

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                        #26
                        I really should finish that poem I started in October... I want to give it to him as a one-year gift. (And, yes, I said "started in October." I'm notoriously bad at follow-through. )
                        My heart belongs to a pilot!
                        ~*~
                        ~*~
                        [/center]

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                          #27
                          So I finished writing my poem just in time to send it for Valentine's Day... better late than never, right?
                          My heart belongs to a pilot!
                          ~*~
                          ~*~
                          [/center]

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                            #28
                            Whew! This took forever to type up! This is a collection of everything I've written, over a period of nearly about 8 or 9 months. They vary in style, word choice, and that sort of thing. Topics also vary as our relationship went through different things. Let me know what you think of my work! I find it inferior to most everything else in this thread, but I figured someone might find some gold in there! If you have questions on topics or just interested in what I went through feel free to message me or just ask it here! Cheers!



                            -------------------------------------------
                            Mistakes have been made,
                            And can never be fixed.
                            I still love you babe,
                            While your feelings are mixed.

                            The times we'll share,
                            And the happiness brought,
                            Could never compare to the feelings sought.

                            -------------------------------------------------

                            Take the shroud from your eyes,
                            And see my hurt inside.
                            What you're saying makes sense,
                            But at what expense?
                            I want to be fine,
                            But it feels like you're not truly mine.
                            I'm sick of the fighting,
                            And all of the pain.
                            In my world there is no lighting,
                            Just darkness and the soft pitter patter of the ceaseless rain.

                            ---------------------------------------------------

                            If only it wasn't like this,
                            So hard did I wish.

                            You say you cry all night,
                            It definitely isn't right.

                            So please hurry and decide,
                            I'm not just along for the ride.

                            I will always love you,
                            No matter what you do.

                            Even though you cry for two,
                            And I only cry for you.

                            ------------------------------------

                            I feel as though,
                            You should know.

                            Know how unlike the rest,
                            For you I want only the best.

                            If it came down to you or death,
                            I'd give you my last breath.

                            My thoughts may haunt me,
                            But it's how it must be.

                            It's not a problem, though you see,
                            Because all I want is you happy.

                            --------------------------------------

                            It all still hurts me,
                            My eyes nearly bursting.

                            My wounds are still bleeding,
                            And I don't see them healing.

                            I won't give up so easily,
                            Open your eyes and really see,
                            How much you mean to me.

                            I'd give it all to be your all,
                            No need to yell if you fall.

                            'Cause I'll be right there,
                            Forever and ever.

                            Your love for all eternity,
                            Is all that I need.

                            -----------------------------------

                            I hurt the same.
                            You feel the same.
                            We cry the same.
                            It feels like nothing has changed.

                            So take my hand and tell me differently?
                            But don't just tell me, open my heart to the truth.

                            Show me you love me just like you did, show me that we're gonna be
                            together forever, show me that he doesn't mean more to you than me,
                            show me that you're my girl.

                            Show me all that, or just show me the truth.

                            I miss when I knew, without a doubt, that you only wanted me. Only wanted my arms
                            around you. Only got turned on when you looked at me. Most importantly, when you
                            had all of your heart reserved for me.

                            (There was two or three paragraphs more to this, but they are quite personal and don't matter anymore, so they needn't be shared =p)
                            ---------------------------------

                            Nothing is going right,
                            You're so far out of sight.

                            You need me now, I know you do.
                            Truth of the matter is, I need you too.

                            I sit and wish upon a star,
                            Still we're apart, so far.

                            I'd take it all, you know I would.
                            I'd do anything for you if I could.

                            I promise that you'll be alright,
                            I'll hold you tight and, of course, all through the night. <3

                            ------------------------------

                            I'm a nervous wreck.
                            I'm on the verge of falling.
                            I'm feeling helpless.
                            I'm in need of her touch.
                            I'm in need of her kiss.
                            I'm sick of the distance.
                            I'm sick of the crying..
                            I'm sometimes a terrible person.
                            Sometimes a dick.
                            Sometimes even an arrogant douche.

                            None of that matters though, because she still loves me. She still wants me.

                            Right now she needs me. Needs to feel me. Needs to know that I'm always there.

                            ------------------------------------------------------------

                            Separated from each other,
                            No want for another.

                            Sometimes I feel like quittin',
                            Then I see your face, to those thoughts I say, "Good Riddance!"

                            But don't fret my beautiful Queen,
                            Those thoughts are few and far between.

                            People may doubt us,
                            But we've said forever,
                            And in that I truly trust.

                            The happiness you bring me,
                            Could carry me across the seven seas.

                            It lifts my spirits to the sky,
                            And I never need to wonder why.

                            It's because you're amazing.
                            It's because you're perfect.
                            It's because you're beautiful.
                            It's because you're sexy.
                            It's because you're brilliant.
                            It's because you're honest.
                            It's because you're special.
                            It's because you're kind.
                            It's because you're an inspiration.
                            It's because you're brave.
                            It's because you're not a quitter.
                            It's because you're you're tough.
                            It's because you're loving.

                            It's because you're all of that...and you're mine <3

                            ------------------------------------------------------------------

                            I sit alone in the dimly lit car,
                            I'm gonna be ok, I'm good so far.

                            I play that familiar track,
                            Then the pain claws it's way back.

                            I listen to all those "miss you" songs,
                            And the tears fall in throngs.

                            Praying to a deity might do the trick,
                            But you know I'm a non-believing prick(;

                            So until the day my life truly starts,
                            I'll sit here and fall apart.

                            I'll need to be rebuilt,
                            Take a rag to the silt,
                            And hopefully I won't drown in this fucking guilt.

                            The pain I feel,
                            Is ever so real.

                            But the problem is,
                            You have to feel the same shit.

                            I absolutely hate that such a beauty,
                            Has to wait on such a beast.
                            This will go on for so long,
                            And I know it's all wrong.

                            You needed it yesterday,
                            You deserve it everyday.
                            And that's all I can really say.

                            -------------------------------------------

                            I sit all alone in this dark, empty home.
                            Begging to finally see you, begging to be with you.
                            I picked a star as you said, but the facts that remain,
                            I'll always dread. I know that I love you, I know
                            We will make it through....

                            As I sit on the edge of my bed I whisper,
                            "Brianna, I love you so much. Forever." I know
                            It's foolish and of course you can't hear me,
                            But just as I uttered those words to myself
                            your heart felt warm and you could have
                            sworn someone said your name.

                            ------------------------------------------

                            The smiles I see,
                            And the laughter I hear,
                            I wish could be caused by me.

                            I sit in this anguish,
                            And I wish and I wish.

                            The grains of sand keep falling,
                            It feels like this beat up ol' pick up is stalling.

                            I've been passing the time,
                            I've tried not to whine.

                            Yet the minutes won't go fast enough.
                            The hours won't fade away.
                            The days won't melt together.
                            The months won't get on with themselves.

                            My calendar and I are stuck in this frozen moment on my hearts accord.

                            ------------------------------------------------------------

                            Wishing this thing was coming your way.
                            Did i mention I read your letter today?

                            My heart is breaking,
                            I fear the bad stuff I've thought of taking.

                            All I want is you,
                            Someone to hold on to.

                            Brianna, you're the syrup to my waffle,
                            The light to my day.
                            Without you I am nothing,
                            So please tell me you'll stay.

                            There is an older couple beside me,
                            Kissing each other and being sweet,
                            And everyday I prove I want that with every single tear.

                            I miss you....

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                              #29
                              Originally posted by Èternity View Post
                              Another day closer to you

                              Today, as I wake,
                              You’re so far away,
                              Feels like an age,
                              since I’ve looked at your face.

                              Spring has arrived,
                              With its colour outside,
                              and once more I rise;
                              to get on with my life.

                              My heart was so jaded
                              My spirit had faded,
                              Loneliness it seemed
                              made a home in my soul.

                              Then another day’s gone,
                              And before long,
                              I rest and I wonder,
                              Pause and I ponder

                              It’s another day
                              closer to you.
                              I absolutely love this one!! Keep it up(:

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                                #30
                                My love wrote me this poem on Valentine's Day and it's the best poem anyone has ever written me <3 I love it, and I love him so much!

                                I wrote you a love story, but I can't remember the lines. So I decided that I'd give you a sweet poem with rhymes.
                                Our time together has been at best a dream come true. Our worst times were sultry too. Honestly I couldn't see being this way with anyone other then you.
                                When perfect words just can't work, you know our love is. Sometimes you'd be so astounded, you'd ask "are you a wiz-", to which I'd quickly respond with a kiss. God forbid I had to define a love as good as this.
                                Sincerely
                                -Erik

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