Hi there !
I'm going to send it to my girlfriend, with a DVD of Cemetery Junction, movie that we saw together on our first date. I wanted you to tell me if it sounds good, and if my english is correct, as I'm not a native
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Looking at the board wondering which movie was the best to watch, the heart of the boy went crazy. It did not really matter for him which movie she wanted to watch, because all he wanted was to spend time with her, to be close to her, feeling her, kissing her... But the boy, generaly shy, was for the first time confident with the situation, like someone or something was giving him power... People commonly call it “Love”, no doubt, it was that !
The movie starts, the boy is not really paying attention to the story. Indeed, his mind is submerged by thinking what he should do with the princess who is seated next to him. Although Love was helping him to not stress, his shyness was still present. Love, really proud of itself, decides to turn even stronger, controlling both Lovers... When Love wants something, Love gets it ! The girl put her head on the boy’s left shoulder, at the moment, the boy moves from a heavy shyness to a paradise of confidence, it was perfect ! Love had won, Love had linked them for the first time. Then, the boy, carried by the power of Love, gives a kiss on the top of her head, Love had linked them for the second time.
Later in the night, while waiting for the train coming, the boy finds an unexpected strength... He gives a quick and short kiss to the girl. Love had won, at the moment, they didn’t know, but Love had linked them forever."
I'm going to send it to my girlfriend, with a DVD of Cemetery Junction, movie that we saw together on our first date. I wanted you to tell me if it sounds good, and if my english is correct, as I'm not a native
"
Looking at the board wondering which movie was the best to watch, the heart of the boy went crazy. It did not really matter for him which movie she wanted to watch, because all he wanted was to spend time with her, to be close to her, feeling her, kissing her... But the boy, generaly shy, was for the first time confident with the situation, like someone or something was giving him power... People commonly call it “Love”, no doubt, it was that !
The movie starts, the boy is not really paying attention to the story. Indeed, his mind is submerged by thinking what he should do with the princess who is seated next to him. Although Love was helping him to not stress, his shyness was still present. Love, really proud of itself, decides to turn even stronger, controlling both Lovers... When Love wants something, Love gets it ! The girl put her head on the boy’s left shoulder, at the moment, the boy moves from a heavy shyness to a paradise of confidence, it was perfect ! Love had won, Love had linked them for the first time. Then, the boy, carried by the power of Love, gives a kiss on the top of her head, Love had linked them for the second time.
Later in the night, while waiting for the train coming, the boy finds an unexpected strength... He gives a quick and short kiss to the girl. Love had won, at the moment, they didn’t know, but Love had linked them forever."
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