Hey all! This is my very first post, and it's gonna be a heavy one! You've been warned haha.
Okay, so i'm seeing the love of my life, my gorgeous girlfriend in Florida in about a months time, i'm gonna meet her mum for the first time ever! (For which im psyched beyond belief for) and I want to bring my romantic A-Game. Now i'm pretty good at this kind of thing, but it sure would be interesting to see what you guys/girls have come up with, I mean totally off the wall stuff.
This visit i'm planning on the following - we wear promise rings that we brought for each other, I want to steal it off her at some point during the trip, take her on a walk down the beach, for a lovely meal at an Italian Restaurant (her fave), and when we get back her room will hopefully be set up with candles, and a single rose, which will have our two rings tied to it, with a peice of paper that will hold a poem that i've written, that I will recite to her, and then give the reasons why I love her and kind of 'renew vows' on our rings.
So this is the poem i've written so far, its very rough and coughed it up in like 5 minutes just now, honest views please !
The soft edges of clouds pass me Glancing light across heavens filter A single hand raised to greet a canvas of the universe The other firmly in yours, greeting the maker of my own Life is in perpetual motion, a leaf floating listlessly across an eternal current A path that is both beautiful and forebodingly vast But on this leaf, we sit together, hands clasped Mine in yours, yours in mine, strength in bonds stronger than diamond Suddenly that journey doesn’t seem so long. So vast. So lonely. It takes a form that is softer, filled with the presence of something enchanting.
My Journey. Your Journey. Terms that no longer exist. We run our fingers through the water, together, its become our journey.
If we are slaves to destiny, and grains of sand on a beach, millions of glass beads strewn across a plain. Fortunate am I to have found you. Fortunate am I to be mastered by something gracious.
The moons visage, a glow only matched by the illuminating smile you share, as we hold each other close, the skies open up to reveal an endless sea of pearls For you, I reach up and pluck one out of this orchid of dreams, holding it in my palms, my dreams, my hopes, my future all become its centre.
Taking your hand in mine I whisper words that only philosophers and lovers could understand.
A carrier of a message, meant only for you, I press it softly to your chest, my legacy passed on under the flicker of time.
As we float down this river, that allows only soul mates to cross, I take to land with your hand in mine. A smile, hopeful eyes, the sunrise never looked so beautiful.
So yeah, poem opinions, way to improve it and your crazy romantic gestures that you've done or that I myself could improve please!
Okay, so i'm seeing the love of my life, my gorgeous girlfriend in Florida in about a months time, i'm gonna meet her mum for the first time ever! (For which im psyched beyond belief for) and I want to bring my romantic A-Game. Now i'm pretty good at this kind of thing, but it sure would be interesting to see what you guys/girls have come up with, I mean totally off the wall stuff.
This visit i'm planning on the following - we wear promise rings that we brought for each other, I want to steal it off her at some point during the trip, take her on a walk down the beach, for a lovely meal at an Italian Restaurant (her fave), and when we get back her room will hopefully be set up with candles, and a single rose, which will have our two rings tied to it, with a peice of paper that will hold a poem that i've written, that I will recite to her, and then give the reasons why I love her and kind of 'renew vows' on our rings.
So this is the poem i've written so far, its very rough and coughed it up in like 5 minutes just now, honest views please !
The soft edges of clouds pass me Glancing light across heavens filter A single hand raised to greet a canvas of the universe The other firmly in yours, greeting the maker of my own Life is in perpetual motion, a leaf floating listlessly across an eternal current A path that is both beautiful and forebodingly vast But on this leaf, we sit together, hands clasped Mine in yours, yours in mine, strength in bonds stronger than diamond Suddenly that journey doesn’t seem so long. So vast. So lonely. It takes a form that is softer, filled with the presence of something enchanting.
My Journey. Your Journey. Terms that no longer exist. We run our fingers through the water, together, its become our journey.
If we are slaves to destiny, and grains of sand on a beach, millions of glass beads strewn across a plain. Fortunate am I to have found you. Fortunate am I to be mastered by something gracious.
The moons visage, a glow only matched by the illuminating smile you share, as we hold each other close, the skies open up to reveal an endless sea of pearls For you, I reach up and pluck one out of this orchid of dreams, holding it in my palms, my dreams, my hopes, my future all become its centre.
Taking your hand in mine I whisper words that only philosophers and lovers could understand.
A carrier of a message, meant only for you, I press it softly to your chest, my legacy passed on under the flicker of time.
As we float down this river, that allows only soul mates to cross, I take to land with your hand in mine. A smile, hopeful eyes, the sunrise never looked so beautiful.
So yeah, poem opinions, way to improve it and your crazy romantic gestures that you've done or that I myself could improve please!
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